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Write a Letter That Really Connects
A well-written letter can go a long way toward establishing or strengthening your customer relations. Here are tips for making your letters more effective:
 
  • Start personal. "Dear Linda" is much more compelling than "Dear Customer."
  • Stay personal.  Encourage the reader to believe you are speaking only to her. This is where your customer file comes in. Use it to personalize your mail communications and make them more powerful. For example, this letter is tailored to a regular customer whose purchase pattern indicates she prefers fiction. Different authors could be substituted for customers who purchase non-fiction.
  • Get to the point.  Don’t try to accomplish too many things in one letter. Establish a primary message, stay with it, and state it clearly early on so that the reader understands it right away. A headline accomplishes this almost instantly.
  • Repeat the point. Keep bringing the reader back to the primary message. Again and again.
  • Be bold. Boldfaced type is more than okay – it’s recommended. Many customers will be too busy to carefully read your letter word by word and may simply glance over it. Boldfaced type will help you capture the eye and maintain the interest of even the most casual reader.
  • Keep it short. Unless your product or offer is complicated, you should keep your letter to one page. Several short paragraphs are more reader-friendly than one long one.
  • Tell your customer exactly what you want them to do. State it simply and clearly.
  • Include your phone number. No matter how simple your message is, or how often you state it, some customers are bound to have questions. Providing your number gives customers a way to reach you without having to dig out the phonebook.
  • Sign it. Don’t forget to include your written signature at the end of each letter, as well as your typed name. A message is much more believable if it’s from someone, rather than from a business, "Susan Wise, Susan’s Books" is stronger than just "Susan’s Books."
  • End with a P.S. The postscript is one of the most-read parts of a marketing letter. Use this important message area to hammer home a single thought (the one that you want your customer to remember after he’s done reading the letter). In his book, Successful Direst Marketing Methods, Bob Stone said, "The P.S. is one of the most effective parts of any letter…use it to restate a key benefit."
  • Make it timely. An expiration date lends a sense of urgency and increases your chances of a response. You can also take a softer tone, indicating a "limited time only," but with no specific cut-off date.